Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Chapter 1<33
GUIGUI & XIAOYU reached Taiwan; both of them were heading to their new school, Blacksweet high school. GUIGUI was reluctant as she was in love with Canada, and the main problem, he didn’t want to see her parents. When they reached, XIAOYU meet up with his best friends, WANGZI and XIAOJIE.
Both WANGZI and XIAOJIE were the dance club chairman and vice-chairman. They want to pull GUIGUI into the club as they heard from XIAOYU she was a fantastic dancer. Once WANGZI’s eye met with GUIGUI’s, he can’t take his eye off her.
GUIGUI; hello. Both of you much is WANGZI and XIAOJIE.
XIAOJIE; yupps! I am XIAOJIE and he’s WANGZI. You have grown a lot since small. Ha-ha.
GUIGUI; ha-ha!
XIAOJIE; so what after-school activity are you joining?
GUIGUI; Not sure. Maybe same as YU GE GE.
XIAOYU; No way. Don’t stick to me.
GUIGUI; -.- fine. Maybe guitar club?
XIAOYU; hey that’s what I am joining. SHOO!
GUIGUI; -.= LAMER! Dance club then?
XIAOJIE; YESH! Without asking you, you are willing to join Hahaah. WELCOME I am the vice-chairman  While WANGZI is the chairman.
GUIGUI was stunned and she was looking at WANGZI weirdly as he has been looking at her for the whole conversation.
WANGZI POV;
OMG. GUIGUI turn to a beauty already. I think I fall in love with her. Now I don’t even have the courage to talk to her. She seems to be different from other girls. I think I need XIAOMAN help. But she will surely reject to help. Haiz.
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shasha: sound interesting... can't wait
PRINCEghost-; hahah hope you will like my story(;

Kodocha2007: sound great
PRINCEghost-; hope you will like my story(;



GUI<3: and commas. Good luck in your story!
GUI<3: Anyway, you might want to correct your puntuations. Like taking away spacings before each fullstops
GUI<3: I doubt alot of people want to read stories about Vampires.
PRINCEghost-: really? Should I change the plot? Yes I will try about the punctuations(;

Story Line
GUIGUI&XIAOYU are cousin . Since young they were at CANADA . but because of studies ,
they decided to head back to taiwan. GUIGUI&XIAOYU soon became the most popular kids in the school
WANGZI, fall in love with GUIGUI after hanging out servals times . XIAOYU was a protective cousin .
YALUN , who was in the family of vampire . Fall in love with GUIGUI at first sight . & YALUN could not fall in love with GUIGUI
as he was graving for guigui blood as she's a virgin . Virgin blood is much more better for vampires .
Yalun knows he will harm her .
GUIGUI was confuse & she did not know what to do . As she is being bullied by females vampire
as some of them fall for YALUN .& was being hunt down by males vampire . With XIAOMAN & XIAOJIE helps.
GUIGUI WILL STAY STRONG .

Main characters
GIRLS
GUIGUI
She is a simple and optimistic girl. She has a huge fashion sense & she's smart & not very rich but because of he cousin AOQUAN, she became rich . First day at school, a few guys are attracted to her. She was struck into a 3-relationship . who will she chose ?
A dancer .

MINI
has a same name as xiaojie . So she decided to use her english name .
blurr. RICH . Fall in love with wangzi or will she change later . GUIGUI best friends

XIAOMAN
tall & has huge fasion sense .
a sister of WANGZI .
charming smile . GUIGUI best friends fall in love with XIAOYU

GUYS~
WANGZI
Has a huge fashion sense& the most popular guy in the school . Fall in love with GUIGUI after much contacts . He is smart . & wants to get whatever he wants . Will he succeed ?
brother of xiaoman
best friend of xiaoyu & wangzi
A dancer

MAODI
wangzi&xiaoman little brother .
A good friend of GUIGUI .
inlove with her but never say out

YALUN
A very smart vampire who is very charming . Fall in love with guigui . but he know he can't .
cause he was graving for GUIGUI blood as GUIGUI was a virgin .

XIAOJIE
SMART .
Huge fashion sense & very rich .
best friends with xiaoyu & wangzi

XIAOYU
Being a protective brother .
Protecting GUIGUI no matter what .
GUIGUI'S cousin .
Very rich .


OTHERS .
HARMFUL vampires .
XIAOXUN
APPLE
DAYA
WEILIAN
YESHOU
XIAOMA

GOOD vampires .
MEIMEI
YAKO
TANGGOU
TIANER
AOQUAN
AHWEI
XIAOLE
XIAOBIN