Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Chapter 1<33
GUIGUI & XIAOYU reached Taiwan; both of them were heading to their new school, Blacksweet high school. GUIGUI was reluctant as she was in love with Canada, and the main problem, he didn’t want to see her parents. When they reached, XIAOYU meet up with his best friends, WANGZI and XIAOJIE.
Both WANGZI and XIAOJIE were the dance club chairman and vice-chairman. They want to pull GUIGUI into the club as they heard from XIAOYU she was a fantastic dancer. Once WANGZI’s eye met with GUIGUI’s, he can’t take his eye off her.
GUIGUI; hello. Both of you much is WANGZI and XIAOJIE.
XIAOJIE; yupps! I am XIAOJIE and he’s WANGZI. You have grown a lot since small. Ha-ha.
GUIGUI; ha-ha!
XIAOJIE; so what after-school activity are you joining?
GUIGUI; Not sure. Maybe same as YU GE GE.
XIAOYU; No way. Don’t stick to me.
GUIGUI; -.- fine. Maybe guitar club?
XIAOYU; hey that’s what I am joining. SHOO!
GUIGUI; -.= LAMER! Dance club then?
XIAOJIE; YESH! Without asking you, you are willing to join Hahaah. WELCOME I am the vice-chairman  While WANGZI is the chairman.
GUIGUI was stunned and she was looking at WANGZI weirdly as he has been looking at her for the whole conversation.
WANGZI POV;
OMG. GUIGUI turn to a beauty already. I think I fall in love with her. Now I don’t even have the courage to talk to her. She seems to be different from other girls. I think I need XIAOMAN help. But she will surely reject to help. Haiz.
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shasha: sound interesting... can't wait
PRINCEghost-; hahah hope you will like my story(;

Kodocha2007: sound great
PRINCEghost-; hope you will like my story(;



GUI<3: and commas. Good luck in your story!
GUI<3: Anyway, you might want to correct your puntuations. Like taking away spacings before each fullstops
GUI<3: I doubt alot of people want to read stories about Vampires.
PRINCEghost-: really? Should I change the plot? Yes I will try about the punctuations(;